I'm pretty stunned that english is your second language. I'd say this work is pretty impressive even if english is your first langauge. This was beautifully put together, and I'd hardly change a thing with any of these sentences.

I don't love to plug my own writing in this way, but this piece I wrote last week I think speaks to a lot of these same ideas: https://medium.com/write-under-the-moon/is-language-an-economy-or-a-tapestry-c6c6cb26d214

No pressure to read, but curious tp hear your thoughts if you do!