Nice to get a little more context on the piece! It's always so interesting what a different process writing and editing a piece can be. I had an old english teacher point out to me recently that writing is a subconscious process, and editing is a conscious one. I'm not sure how true that is all the time for me, but I've had a hard time unseeing a certain truth in that.
Also, good on you for writing everywhere! My last unexpected writing location was in the middle of an orchestra concert lol. I was too stimulated not to pull out my phone and start jotting down some notes.
Thanks for sending this one in, Mark!